MISERABLE- Location, Prop and Shot List
Location- My house (currently having an extension which is half complete and can easily be used as a derelict building.)
Props- Two full suits
Two handguns (BB guns?)
Two pairs of sunglasses
A fake severed penis (may not be seen on camera for the sake of how disgusting it will be)
Empty money bag
Mobile Phone
Cigarette
Shot List-
1) Long two-shot of E and M sitting against the wall, slouched and silent.
2) Medium shot of E as he stands, tracks up with him.
3)-10) Back and forth Medium close ups of E and M on each of their lines.
11) Long two-shot of them both on the line- "Because I am clearly the one being a prick here."
12) Close-up on M as he says- "Don't fucking go outside."
13) Long two-shot of them both.
14) Medium shot of M on- "Three hours... we’ve been here for three hours... "
15) Long shot of E- "Ugh. I’m so bored."
16) Extreme long two-shot of E and M. M stands as he says- "Come here, put the fag away, sit down and shut up."
17) Close-up on E as he comes to sit down next to M on his line- "Mag- I'm not being funny- but the cops have gone. No way are they still hanging around here. They’ll be doing a distance sweep by now."
18) Medium two shot of E and M sitting next to one another. E stands as he says- "Like going around the city and that, if they haven’t checked a building like a few metres from the bank yet they clearly won’t check it now."
19)-22) Shot reverse shot medium close-up on M and E in their exchange.
23) Long shot on M as he counts through them on his fingers- "Because you haven’t done anything to prove otherwise yet. First you botched the getaway, you botched the job, you botched the hostages and now you’re threatening to botch this too-"
24)-35) Quick cut shot reverse shot close-up on M and E as they argue.
36) Extreme long shot as M stands, shouting in rage- "He was a liability? Maybe he was- but he wasn’t the one who set fire to the car, took the wrong bag, murdered a hostage and got Livingstone fucking killed."
37)Extreme close-up shot reverse shot between M and E- "Why not"- "No- because I'm trying my best and that's all you can do."
38) Extreme long shot of M and E at opposite ends of the room. Holds until E leaves.
39) Extreme close-up as E approaches the frame, and stands in front of the camera, cigarette in his mouth. Over his shoulder, M is seen.
40) Over the shoulder shot from M's perspective of E in the garden, slow track down to the gun, back to E, back to the gun, and back to E.
41) Extreme close up on the pistol as M reaches for it.
42) POV shot down the barrel of the gun, as it tracks across to E.
43) Reverse shot on M's face, as he squints to fire.
44) Over shoulder shot on M, E is seen in the garden but begins to turn with his line- "You reckon we could- HOLY FUCK!"
45) Close-up on M as he throws his hands up in surrender- "NO-NO IT’S NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE!"
46) Medium shot, only showing E above the waist as he fumbles for the gun. A gunshot is heard. He stands in dead silence.
47) Medium shot on M who is too in stunned silence.
48) Extreme long shot as both stand, glaring at one another. Eventually M asks- "What did you just do?"- "I think- I think I just... shot my dick off."- "Okay, okay- you're- you're going to be fine just-just- no calm down. Calm down. Calm. Calm. Deep breaths yeah? In, out. Now slowly- SLOWLY- take the gun out of your trousers- slowly. Slowly- slowly- SLOWLY. Finger off the trigger- yep off- slow. Yeah... that’s it. Now just lay it down- nice and slow. Okay... okay..."- shot maintained throughout this action.
49) Extreme close-up on E's hand as it slips form his trousers, soaked in blood.
50) Medium two shot of E and M facing one another, M comforting E. From- "Yeah- yes you did... I’ll- I’ll call Tony- he'll get a doctor or something. A hospital. We can get you a- a- a- a hospital and you’ll be okay. Say it back."- "Yeah... you will. Now I’m gunna call him."
51) Extreme close-up on M as he speaks to T on the phone. E can be seen in the background, focus is pulled between M and E on each of their lines. From- "Oh my God... Magnolia... Magnolia! I shot my cock off! Oh my God!"- "Look! Look!"
52) Low angle shot from behind E, with his trousers around his ankles. M half turns to face him, shielding the wound form his view with a hand. From- "Put it away Elf! Put that back in your trousers!"- "Elf shot his own dick and we- we need a doctor. Now."
53) Extreme close-up on M, focus pulled once more between he and E who is seen in the background. From- "Look at my cock Mag, look at it! It’s in two!"- "Thank you- now put it back"
54) Extreme long shot of E and M. The two embrace. From- "put it in your pocket. Put it away, Elf."- "I’m sorry... I’m so sorry..."
55) Close-up over shoulder shot on M- "You’re okay now Elf... you’re okay now... you’re bleeding really slow... really slow..."
56) Close-up over shoulder shot on E- "Okay... okay..."
57) Close-up over shoulder shot on M- "It’ll take you days to die form an injury like that... you’ll live Elf, you’ll live. Okay?" Shot maintained until the car is heard. They break the embrace and both turn to face the noise.
58) Medium two shot on E and M, from the POV of the footsteps. Both stare directly down the lens in fear, M slowly draws his pistol and points it directly at the camera. The shot slowly rotates around them with the movement of the footsteps.
59) POV shot down the barrel of M's pistol, tracking the noise, slowly panning with it.
58)-62) Back to the medium two-shot facing M and E. (Fast cuts between POV of M and POV of footsteps)
63) Medium two-shot on M and E, static now as the footsteps have ceased. They pause for a moment both staring. Camera slowly pushes in on them becoming an extreme close-up.
64) Extreme low angle, long shot on a figure coming through the door, who is abruptly shot and falls straight to the ground.
65) Reverse low angle long shot and E and M, M holding a smoking gun.
66) Extreme long shot from the side, dead body with only legs in frame. M slowly approaches- "Holy shit. Mag... you killed him..."- "The driver?"
67) Extreme close-up on M- "Oh... shit..."
68) Over shoulder shot on E, M is at extreme close-up, with E in deep background- "You shot the driver? You shot the driver?". Focus pulled to M- "Oh... oh no...". Focus pull to E- "What will Tony do? What will he do?". Focus pull to M- "Oh god...".
69) Extreme long shot form the side on E and M. From- "He’s going to kill us... isn’t he? He’ll kill us both... oh SHIT"- "It doesn’t have to be- it doesn’t...". Slowly pushes in as E and M get closer and closer to one another, ending barely a centimetre apart.
70) Extreme close-up on M- "I’m doing it whether you do or not... just be honest with yourself Elf... we’re already done... already done..." He shoots, falling out of frame. The camera lingers on where he was.
71) Extreme long shot on the whole room, E in the middle of it. Held until he is finally bundled on the floor in tears.
Props- Two full suits
Two handguns (BB guns?)
Two pairs of sunglasses
A fake severed penis (may not be seen on camera for the sake of how disgusting it will be)
Empty money bag
Mobile Phone
Cigarette
Shot List-
1) Long two-shot of E and M sitting against the wall, slouched and silent.
2) Medium shot of E as he stands, tracks up with him.
3)-10) Back and forth Medium close ups of E and M on each of their lines.
11) Long two-shot of them both on the line- "Because I am clearly the one being a prick here."
12) Close-up on M as he says- "Don't fucking go outside."
13) Long two-shot of them both.
14) Medium shot of M on- "Three hours... we’ve been here for three hours... "
15) Long shot of E- "Ugh. I’m so bored."
16) Extreme long two-shot of E and M. M stands as he says- "Come here, put the fag away, sit down and shut up."
17) Close-up on E as he comes to sit down next to M on his line- "Mag- I'm not being funny- but the cops have gone. No way are they still hanging around here. They’ll be doing a distance sweep by now."
18) Medium two shot of E and M sitting next to one another. E stands as he says- "Like going around the city and that, if they haven’t checked a building like a few metres from the bank yet they clearly won’t check it now."
19)-22) Shot reverse shot medium close-up on M and E in their exchange.
23) Long shot on M as he counts through them on his fingers- "Because you haven’t done anything to prove otherwise yet. First you botched the getaway, you botched the job, you botched the hostages and now you’re threatening to botch this too-"
24)-35) Quick cut shot reverse shot close-up on M and E as they argue.
36) Extreme long shot as M stands, shouting in rage- "He was a liability? Maybe he was- but he wasn’t the one who set fire to the car, took the wrong bag, murdered a hostage and got Livingstone fucking killed."
37)Extreme close-up shot reverse shot between M and E- "Why not"- "No- because I'm trying my best and that's all you can do."
38) Extreme long shot of M and E at opposite ends of the room. Holds until E leaves.
39) Extreme close-up as E approaches the frame, and stands in front of the camera, cigarette in his mouth. Over his shoulder, M is seen.
40) Over the shoulder shot from M's perspective of E in the garden, slow track down to the gun, back to E, back to the gun, and back to E.
41) Extreme close up on the pistol as M reaches for it.
42) POV shot down the barrel of the gun, as it tracks across to E.
43) Reverse shot on M's face, as he squints to fire.
44) Over shoulder shot on M, E is seen in the garden but begins to turn with his line- "You reckon we could- HOLY FUCK!"
45) Close-up on M as he throws his hands up in surrender- "NO-NO IT’S NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE!"
46) Medium shot, only showing E above the waist as he fumbles for the gun. A gunshot is heard. He stands in dead silence.
47) Medium shot on M who is too in stunned silence.
48) Extreme long shot as both stand, glaring at one another. Eventually M asks- "What did you just do?"- "I think- I think I just... shot my dick off."- "Okay, okay- you're- you're going to be fine just-just- no calm down. Calm down. Calm. Calm. Deep breaths yeah? In, out. Now slowly- SLOWLY- take the gun out of your trousers- slowly. Slowly- slowly- SLOWLY. Finger off the trigger- yep off- slow. Yeah... that’s it. Now just lay it down- nice and slow. Okay... okay..."- shot maintained throughout this action.
49) Extreme close-up on E's hand as it slips form his trousers, soaked in blood.
50) Medium two shot of E and M facing one another, M comforting E. From- "Yeah- yes you did... I’ll- I’ll call Tony- he'll get a doctor or something. A hospital. We can get you a- a- a- a hospital and you’ll be okay. Say it back."- "Yeah... you will. Now I’m gunna call him."
51) Extreme close-up on M as he speaks to T on the phone. E can be seen in the background, focus is pulled between M and E on each of their lines. From- "Oh my God... Magnolia... Magnolia! I shot my cock off! Oh my God!"- "Look! Look!"
52) Low angle shot from behind E, with his trousers around his ankles. M half turns to face him, shielding the wound form his view with a hand. From- "Put it away Elf! Put that back in your trousers!"- "Elf shot his own dick and we- we need a doctor. Now."
53) Extreme close-up on M, focus pulled once more between he and E who is seen in the background. From- "Look at my cock Mag, look at it! It’s in two!"- "Thank you- now put it back"
54) Extreme long shot of E and M. The two embrace. From- "put it in your pocket. Put it away, Elf."- "I’m sorry... I’m so sorry..."
55) Close-up over shoulder shot on M- "You’re okay now Elf... you’re okay now... you’re bleeding really slow... really slow..."
56) Close-up over shoulder shot on E- "Okay... okay..."
57) Close-up over shoulder shot on M- "It’ll take you days to die form an injury like that... you’ll live Elf, you’ll live. Okay?" Shot maintained until the car is heard. They break the embrace and both turn to face the noise.
58) Medium two shot on E and M, from the POV of the footsteps. Both stare directly down the lens in fear, M slowly draws his pistol and points it directly at the camera. The shot slowly rotates around them with the movement of the footsteps.
59) POV shot down the barrel of M's pistol, tracking the noise, slowly panning with it.
58)-62) Back to the medium two-shot facing M and E. (Fast cuts between POV of M and POV of footsteps)
63) Medium two-shot on M and E, static now as the footsteps have ceased. They pause for a moment both staring. Camera slowly pushes in on them becoming an extreme close-up.
64) Extreme low angle, long shot on a figure coming through the door, who is abruptly shot and falls straight to the ground.
65) Reverse low angle long shot and E and M, M holding a smoking gun.
66) Extreme long shot from the side, dead body with only legs in frame. M slowly approaches- "Holy shit. Mag... you killed him..."- "The driver?"
67) Extreme close-up on M- "Oh... shit..."
68) Over shoulder shot on E, M is at extreme close-up, with E in deep background- "You shot the driver? You shot the driver?". Focus pulled to M- "Oh... oh no...". Focus pull to E- "What will Tony do? What will he do?". Focus pull to M- "Oh god...".
69) Extreme long shot form the side on E and M. From- "He’s going to kill us... isn’t he? He’ll kill us both... oh SHIT"- "It doesn’t have to be- it doesn’t...". Slowly pushes in as E and M get closer and closer to one another, ending barely a centimetre apart.
70) Extreme close-up on M- "I’m doing it whether you do or not... just be honest with yourself Elf... we’re already done... already done..." He shoots, falling out of frame. The camera lingers on where he was.
71) Extreme long shot on the whole room, E in the middle of it. Held until he is finally bundled on the floor in tears.
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