Screenplay Script comparisons

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In class we looked at three different introductions to three different film scripts and compared their effectiveness. I personally believed the introduction to Taxi Driver to be the strongest. It is cohesive, collected and introduces every aspect of Travis Bickle that you then see expanded on in the film. It acts as the perfect set up and outline of his character albeit a little long-winded and overly-dramatic. It also introduces various themes and ideas that are played out in the film and is almost written like a book. Its quite stunning to read.

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